Nov. 15 Commuting
Apologies, people! I cannot get serious tonight! This will have to suffice. I'm taking the rest of the night off.Commuting My husband writes a sonnet in the car. D'doo, d'doo, d'doo, d'doo, d'doo....
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How funny! I can picture the two of you at a stoplight doing this. d'doo d'doo d'doo indeed!
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I love it For variation at the end maybe try But both of us are stuck. The sonnets done. D'dum d'dum d'dum d'dum d'dum
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This is just great! Love, love, love it. The d'doo, d'doo is poetic history (and hysterics!). Love the "I nod." and "Good job." I can just see you saying this to Tom. This is SO good! So funny. And...
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oh- you're not really apologizing for this, are you? You know very well it's a keeper. Just needs the right venue.
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Well, a pretty quick toss-off. I like it a lot better now that I've read it a few times.
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then you gotta know it's good. Lotta poems one likes less after a few times. I do like Cyn's d'dum idea as well. (though it would rile some teachers I know, to say "done".)
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oh yes, this is much better than its promo. And Cyn's ending, too. There! You've done it already--you said you were going to do a sonnet and you did.
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